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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Love these lines:

If they think

I have committed a crime

then I say "check the mirror before speaking"

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Clouds, rain, food, and houses are made out of Stardust.

Perfect.

Oh, and I learned another new word today. Enjambment I often wondered as I'm reading some poets here, one in particular that never uses punctuation. It's just a lot of run-on sentences is what I called them initially, it bothered me but now it's quite enjoyable as I can read it as quickly as I want. Something different and new for me always.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

I like the symbolism of the way you use colour. It becomes specific but also universal.

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Very powerful poem.

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