Love it! So edgy. I've been looking to read edgier work. It speaks to my soul and gives me inspiration. You include odors and textures which I adore in poetry. This really touched me. I could feel it.
Smoke screams from clouds condensation and tear torn tobacco juice drops. Marlboro man puffing his last breath on a Montana Rocky Mountain high horse alone.
What a gripping poem, Daniel! Real, tangible sensations and lines that pull deeper meaning out of the preceding ones.
Love it! So edgy. I've been looking to read edgier work. It speaks to my soul and gives me inspiration. You include odors and textures which I adore in poetry. This really touched me. I could feel it.
Every word had me in the moment. A moving, poignant poem, Daniel.
Blessings,
~Wendy💜
Smoke screams from clouds condensation and tear torn tobacco juice drops. Marlboro man puffing his last breath on a Montana Rocky Mountain high horse alone.