What's a life without curiosity or discovery?
I love the opposites and the contradictions in this one. Reminds me of the back and forth I use with my writing as well, or the duality. Heavy but not heavy. Amazing piece!
Thank you! Some experimenting with shorter poems helped me really hone in on what I wanted to do with this.
Definitely worth exploring. Shorter poems tell wonderful stories. I see how much your writing is just going from strength to strength.
What a sobering thought.
Isn't it just?
With in the raindrops rise amorphous wonders ; visualize their essence under magnification — magnificent forms to delight.
With my experience with the rain, I agree with this completely. Within raindrops you can find solace.
I love the opposites and the contradictions in this one. Reminds me of the back and forth I use with my writing as well, or the duality. Heavy but not heavy. Amazing piece!
Thank you! Some experimenting with shorter poems helped me really hone in on what I wanted to do with this.
Definitely worth exploring. Shorter poems tell wonderful stories. I see how much your writing is just going from strength to strength.
What a sobering thought.
Isn't it just?
With in the raindrops rise amorphous wonders ; visualize their essence under magnification — magnificent forms to delight.
With my experience with the rain, I agree with this completely. Within raindrops you can find solace.