1st Poem from NaPoWrMo that I added a few more lines to and some clarification since I wasn't satisfied with the first draft.
No light beyond the ending line - a fitting line to the whole poem.
Yes!!! Thanks for your comment Fontini.
Some animals are more equal than others, but it turns out all animals are the same.
Very poignant with what the book itself was getting at Paul. Great comment.
No light beyond the ending line - a fitting line to the whole poem.
Yes!!! Thanks for your comment Fontini.
Some animals are more equal than others, but it turns out all animals are the same.
Very poignant with what the book itself was getting at Paul. Great comment.