Tenth in a series of Rain poems.
I love the rhythm of this: "time-warps/ me shoulder-length to my dancing stepfather in our/ kitchenette"
Thank you for the comment Margaret. Really worked hard to make it fit with the concrete form.
Cookery poetry with a splash of rain. This was full of flavour and atmosphere. Granny Smiths, potatoes and onions. Very visual!
Thank you! Happy this translated well for you.
I love the rhythm of this: "time-warps/ me shoulder-length to my dancing stepfather in our/ kitchenette"
Thank you for the comment Margaret. Really worked hard to make it fit with the concrete form.
Cookery poetry with a splash of rain. This was full of flavour and atmosphere. Granny Smiths, potatoes and onions. Very visual!
Thank you! Happy this translated well for you.