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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Oh wow, those last two lines! And I really recognize:

"Their vision straight ahead,

needling into nothing

but a void of what ifs,

what shoulds, and most dangerously

what oughts."

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Fotini Masika's avatar

I bet on you, Daniel!

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Frederick Fullerton's avatar

Fine powerful poem. The more I read the more it speaks to me.

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Mary Pierce's avatar

Powerful Daniel. Thank you!

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