The revision of a poem I wrote around 2011. Definitely one where I didn't follow my own advice on. Revisions done were the addition of enjambments, clarifications, a new ending line, and new title.
There is no past that can be improved. Improve yourself today and you will live a better tomorrow.
Thank you, Daniel
There is no past that can be improved. Improve yourself today and you will live a better tomorrow.
Thank you, Daniel