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Richbee's avatar

The heart wants what the heart wants. No more no less. A rose wilts, hugs surround. Kiss affection. Love is a disease that catches you unaware.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Breathtaking, from start to finish, Daniel!

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

What an ending!

"Can anyone answer

what God won’t

and what time

dangles

but denies?"

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

More than meets the eye on this one. It kind of breaks with the divorce line but then it picks up again and flows. Direct, honest and the true love is a quest. You'd think we all give the same interpretation on this one theme that unites. Your poem makes the reader think and that's a good thing. I am curious as to what the original looked like. Not that you have to share. Just wondered. Great work, Daniel!

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

what God won’t

and what time

dangles

but denies?

What an ending, Daniel!!

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