This is lovely. The shorter lines do something really cool to the poem. Maybe because when I read it out loud, it made me read more slowly and take in each word? I don't know, but I like it.
Sews a peaceful resistance movement one stitch at a time. Silver lining lives in us all just need to thread the needle to mend a wound stop the bleeding.
This is really good. It was like every word was supposed to be there as I read it. Like Deja vu poetry.
There silver lining is there if we look close enough. This is a great reminder written eloquently.
This is lovely. The shorter lines do something really cool to the poem. Maybe because when I read it out loud, it made me read more slowly and take in each word? I don't know, but I like it.
Sews a peaceful resistance movement one stitch at a time. Silver lining lives in us all just need to thread the needle to mend a wound stop the bleeding.
Love this