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I love the ending. It’s so surprising.

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Great ending image/smell/panic:

"when you smell smoke

wafting from the kitchen

and you've forgotten

to change the batteries

in the fire alarm."

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"With pain's departure

comes the arrival of a revelation,

unsolicited but a necessary investment

for a better future—"

Yes. Yes.

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A cosmic wave offers you a ride on a boogie board that brings you safe and sound to land on the beach of dust…

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