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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Adore these lines:

"Next to it a boulevard of dead

good intentions."

Wonderful poem.

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Tara Connor's avatar

"... more steel than the railroad track" is wonderful! I love this. And I'm so glad you posted it. Never too late to reply to one of these prompts. No rules, just poetry.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

We can walk for a change. Feel the ground beneath our feet.

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

My favorite lines:

“Despite being up to their gills in squalor

and poverty, the souls of the forgotten are more

steel than the railroad track

meant to segregate and isolate.”

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Geraldine A. V. Hughes's avatar

A stellar flaming arrow on mark! Thank you Tara, Geraldine

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